Patching pot holes in digital books

coverRevision. Revision. Revision. Any writer knows the importance of the “R” word in making one’s work better. The same idea applies to revising and improving not only that first (or second or third) draft, but also to improving the quality of previously published works with revised editions.

It’s a process that reminds me of how, at this time of year as winter gives way to spring, road crews are out patching pot holes.

For authors, one of the great benefits of ebooks and print-on-demand technology is that we can return to the text and make changes when some alert reader (or the author, lol) spots a typo or similar mistake. Writers and editors seek to slay a typo whenever we meet one, but sometimes these literary pot holes sneak into a published text. With an ebook, a revised version of a novel can be offered (hopefully without the mistake).

It’s funny how in publishing, everything old is new again. For example, Charles Dickens was what we might call today a “self publisher” in that he basically owned and edited the  popular magazines in which his serialized novels were published. After the books were completed, he sometimes went back and made fairly substantial changes. The ending of “Great Expectations” went through several published versions as he moved toward the ambiguous ending we have today for this classic novel.

Samuel Clemens was another author who participated in a kind of independent publishing by editing and printing President Grant’s memoirs.

Somehow, I think Mark Twain and Charles Dickens would have loved the possibilities that ebooks and print on demand present authors.

Because ebooks are still relatively new, the earlier versions have some quirks that stand out now that the techniques for creating (and reading) ebooks have evolved. As time allows, Indie authors will probably want to go back and make improvements to their earlier books.

I published my first ebook in 2010, and I’ve since revised that book (and all my other ebooks) at least once to improve formatting, covers, etc. Last summer, I made some fairly substantial changes to improve the readability of WINTER SNIPER. In late 2012 and early 2013, I repeated the process with REBEL TRAIN and came out with a new print version as well. Just this month, I completed an editorial review of REBEL FEVER and made a revised digital edition available. FIRST VOYAGE: THE SEA LORD CHRONICLES also saw a few formatting changes to the text. The result, I hope, is that these books are even better.

These tweaks were very minor, mostly involving changing the paragraph indents. Of course, it’s hard to change one element in a digital book without impacting other areas, and so items such as bullets and chapter headings also had to be tweaked as a result. In the case of REBEL TRAIN, the revision involved a new cover.

It’s a time-consuming process, to be sure, and I don’t know that the revisons make much difference in terms of sales, but “in my book,” it’s all about trying to improve the experience for the reader. I appreciate the fact that someone is taking time out to read the book and I want to make it better for them.

We may also be changing our idea of a book being a static work. Who’s to say that, like Dickens, some popular authors might revisit and change their novels in subtle ways as they gain new insights or revelations about their characters and their stories.

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Lessons learned from an Amazon ebook giveaway

Sea Lord rankingFIRST VOYAGE: THE SEA LORD CHRONICLES sailed into the top listings for its categories (No. 1 in “military and war” for children and No. 6 for “sea stories” in general).  Huzzah!

The Amazon promo wrapped up at midnight Tuesday with more than 160 readers downloading the free ebook from Friday through Tuesday. That works out to roughly 30 downloads per day. It was a pretty good deal, considering the book was being listed at $5.99. Overall, this was an impressive number of books downloaded, when you see that in February the book sold just 12 copies (and about the same number in January). Not exactly burning up the sales charts, so the giveaway basically connected a year’s worth of readers with the book in just five days.

Making it free was one step … but how was I going to let people know about the book deal on Amazon?

I tweeted and posted on Facebook, of course, so that got some response. It’s a little harder to tell the results of the Tweets, though I did try a couple of hashtags such as #freeebooks for someone looking for, well, free books! I’m just not sure about the value of Twitter because it does seem like a vast wasteland of self promotion. I don’t download those books people constantly Tweet about unless it’s something that really grabs me. Do you?

Also, I took out a small ad on Goodreads to promote the giveaway. Though viewed by more than 10,000 visitors, the ad got just 7 clicks for the free on Kindle offer, which was disappointing (and very expensive “per click”). Honestly, I’ve never had much luck with Goodreads “self serve” advertising and probably won’t bother again because your book just becomes so much background noise. Let’s just be clear that overall Goodreads is wonderful … it’s just not a great advertising vehicle for authors.

On his blog, the lively J.A. Konrath suggested promoting through BOOKHUB and I gave that a try, but my offer was rejected by the gatekeepers at BOOKHUB. That left me scratching my head—I guess it’s exclusive or something, even though I was trying to buy paid advertising. If those guys ran a restaurant, I suppose you’d need to wear a coat and tie to get in the door, and maybe slip somebody a couple of twenties to get a table.

All in all, however, I was happy with how the giveaway turned out. It was a lot of work and effort, for which I earned nothing as an author, but perhaps some kind souls will post honest reviews about the book on Amazon. There might also be some benefit in terms of increased visibility on the Amazon bestseller lists, at least in the short term. I’ll also be lowering the price … maybe that will help someone decide if their cursor is hovering over that yellow “Buy this book” button.

The most important thing to keep in mind regarding the giveaway is that the book made it into the hands of readers.

One thing for sure, I never could have afforded to hand out more than 150 print books to anybody who wanted one. With an ebook, it’s my feeling that those free copies got into the hands of people who (hopefully) really want to read it. Once again, what Amazon has done for authors and readers is nothing short of spectacular and game changing.

Thank you to all those who have bought or downloaded THE SEA LORD CHRONICLES. Enjoy the voyage, my friends.

 

 

 

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SEA LORD CHRONICLES Kindle giveaway sets sail!

Alexander Hope is the hero of THE SEA LORD CHRONICLES, published in 2012.

Alexander Hope is the hero of THE SEA LORD CHRONICLES, published in 2012.

Starting Friday and running over the next few days, FIRST VOYAGE: THE SEA LORD CHRONICLES is going to be free to Amazon Kindle readers. If you have a Kindle, please feel free to download. Enjoy! Post a review to let everyone know what you thought of the book!

While it’s nice to sell a few books, deep down all that writers really want is for someone to read our books. That’s why it can be very frustrating when a book I love and believe in just hasn’t caught on with readers.

I’ve been having this experience with FIRST VOYAGE: THE SEA LORD CHRONICLES.   Set during the Napoleonic era, it’s a great story with good characters that ends with an emotional cliffhanger. The twist is that this isn’t “straight-up” history as with my other books, because there is an element of magic and fantasy. And did I mention that it’s a book geared toward Young Adult/Teen readers?

The “official” description goes like this:

“First Voyage: The Sea Lord Chronicles” mixes the Napoleonic Wars in the Age of Sail, historical fantasy and a coming-of-age story for an exciting new sea adventure series.

When 14-year-old Alexander Hope is sent away by his stingy uncle to become a junior officer in the Royal Navy, he has never seen the sea. There are high expectations for Alexander, whose famous ancestor was Sir Algernon Hope, a sea elemental who defeated the Spanish Armada and saved England from invasion. England is once again fighting for survival, this time against the Emperor Napoleon.

Though he gets off to a rough start by getting seasick in port and making a bitter enemy, Alexander soon finds new confidence in himself and discovers that he may have inherited his heroic ancestor’s ability to command the sea.

As England—and the H.M.S. Resolution—struggle for survival against the forces of the Napoleonists, Alexander’s newfound ability could tip the balance of power.

Part of what makes the book special for me is that I collaborated on it with my son and daughter (teens themselves) and they gave me some great advice.

It’s all a little different from what I’ve written before and that’s probably working against the book. In the past, I’ve written about Civil War and World War II snipers, a plot to kidnap Abe Lincoln, a World War II thriller, and non-fiction histories. Even I have to admit that THE SEA LORD CHRONICLES is a departure from the usual path.

So I’m going to offer it for free for 5 days on Amazon in hopes that it will reach a wider audience and get noticed. With any luck, readers will post a few more reviews at Amazon, which will be payment enough.

I can’t really take credit for this idea, because I felt compelled to give it a try after reading J.A. Konrath’s blog. The Indie publishing ninja has noted that the free Kindle download (for a limited time) is worth a shot to give a book a boost and help get it noticed.

Here’s hoping for a fair wind for FIRST VOYAGE: THE SEA LORD CHRONICLES! Oh, and be sure to get your free copy over at Amazon!

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Judging a book by its cover

Kindle cover2Book covers can be a real challenge for authors. When you are being published by a “legacy publisher” they design the cover for you … but sometimes there are some surprises.

This happened to me a few years ago with REBEL TRAIN. I really wasn’t happy with the cover that the publisher came up with, and spoke up about it. The result was … an even worse cover!

That’s the way it goes sometimes. The good news is that for the most part, I’ve had really great covers from Jove Books, Bella Rosa Books, and The History Press.  All of these guys are class acts and do top-notch work. Even PublishAmerica did a nice job with the cover of REBEL FEVER and the production overall. That was a few years ago, however, and I would never go that route again because publishing options have changed significantly in the author’s favor.

But what does one do about cover design these days when so much has moved toward indie publishing? No more simply handling the cover off to the publisher! Cover designer is just one of the many hats that an indie author must wear.

Ultimately, even with the popularity of ebooks, I still think that covers matter. They catch the reader’s eye and signal something to the reader about the quality of the work. If a lot of care went into the cover, and there was a clear investment of time and effort (which often means money) in creating a good cover, it’s likely that the story itself will mirror that effort.

I have to say that my newspaper background has come in handy in developing cover designs. For starters, I learned a little something about fonts, colors, cropping images, and PhotoShop while designing all those newspaper pages. Books and newspapers are very different products, but some of the basic design rules are much the same.

One of the reasons authors have to design their own covers comes down to simple economics. It’s quite costly to hire a designer, and looking at the work by some of the cover designers who have hung their shingle on the web, it’s clear that not everyone knows what they’re about. And so authors sometimes do the best we can on our own.

I designed the covers for TIME REICH and WINTER SNIPER. These books have been fairly successful in terms of sales, and I think the covers deserve some of the credit for that.

For FIRST VOYAGE: THE SEA LORD CHRONICLES I arranged for a very talented artist to create the artwork, and then through trial and error found a font I liked for the cover (which I then repeated in the chapter headings throughout the print book). Although I love this cover and think it’s my best story yet, sales have been slow for this book. I hope one day it finds its readership, because this is one of those books I really believe in.

I’ve had much less success with the cover for REBEL TRAIN … the book cover that gave me so much trouble in the first place with its original publisher! I recently tinkered with the cover image, adding color to the original black and white illustration. It still wasn’t quite there for me. And so I went “shopping” for book cover ideas at the local library and bookstores. I finally found a design I could adapt, and I’m eager to see if the new cover design gives the book any slight sales boost.

Recently, I’ve come across some folks who seem to be very talented cover designers and I think that the cover for my next indie publishing effort will be turned over to them so that I can spend more time working on the “words” rather than the artwork. More and more, I think the expectation for indie authors will be that their covers and production work must be just as good as the “big guys.”

 

 

 

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Writing goals for 2013

Alexander Hope is the hero of THE SEA LORD CHRONICLES, published in 2012.

Alexander Hope is the hero of THE SEA LORD CHRONICLES, published in 2012.

The year is already passing in a blur, and so is the book biz. Publishing has changed so much from the days when I shopped manuscripts around to agents and worried about things like return postage, manuscript boxes, and using rag content paper to make a good impression.

I would consider myself a “hybrid” author as described by Robert Bidinotto because I continue to have books come out with established publishers, and yet I’ve also Indie-published two novels. What’s a writer to do in this confusing time but just try to improve his craft and offer readers an entertaining, quality book, no matter who publishes it!

Last year saw TIME REICH, FIRST VOYAGE: THE SEA LORD CHRONICLES and GREAT STORMS OF THE CHESAPEAKE come out. What’s on tap for 2013?

Here goes …

Finish a major GHOSTWRITING and editing project that I’ve undertaken. We’re going to Indie publish this memoir, so it’s quite a process. But this individual has a life story well worth sharing that will be inspiring to many others. I know it made me see things in a new way. We’ll be launching the memoir first as an ebook and then releasing the print version (hopefully) by summer.

Welcome THE HOUSE THAT WENT DOWN WITH THE SHIP to my list of published books. Number nine! This is the first in my “Delmarva Renovators” mystery series about the crew of an online home improvement show that has a habit of having dead people turn up on the job site. This story is set in the waterfront town of Chesapeake City, Maryland. I’ve really enjoyed working with my wonderful publisher Bella Rosa Books in helping to make this book better. The book should be out in spring/summer in both print and ebook.

Revise a stand-alone mystery/suspense novel that I actually wrote years ago, and which caught the eye of an agent, but the time wasn’t right for the book. I’m thinking that 2013 will be the year for this book, which has a working title of BEACH BODIES. Not everyone is on board with that title because they think it sounds like a workout or diet book, so we’ll see! What’s a hoot is that the technology has changed so much since I first wrote this story that I keep finding “artifacts” mentioned such as the characters using a “pay phone” or driving a “Chevy Cavalier.” Remember those, lol? This is a pretty heavy duty revision that will see the location of the book changed to Rehoboth Beach, the nation’s summer capitol. Sounds like a great beach read, if I do say so myself!

My shiny “toy wagon” for the year … the book that I am slowly getting started on … is another World War II thriller. One of the main characters is related to Lucas Cole from SHARPSHOOTER and his commanding officer just happens to be descended from Brendan Mulholland. While their ancestors were bitter enemies during the Civl War, these guys will be fighting on the same side, taking on a crack SS sniper in the hedgerow country near the Normandy beaches.

Here’s hoping you also have a great year reading and writing!

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Answering a few questions about The Sea Lord Chronicles

gryphonHere are a few questions that have come up about The Sea Lord Chronicles, and so I thought I would compile them here … along with a few answers!

Q. What inspired you to write The Sea Lord Chronicles?

A. I’m a big fan of Young Adult literature, a category of fiction geared toward younger readers that is increasingly popular with adults. I’ve always felt that there could be more adventure books for boys in this YA category. As an author, it was my goal to write an exciting, historically based military adventure that would keep boys reading and perhaps inspire them to learn more about real-life history.

Q. What kind of adventures stories did you read as a kid?

A. Not counting Classics Illustrated comic books, I grew up reading a lot of frontier adventure novels, particularly those by a wonderful writer named William O. Steele. In his books, a boy becomes a hero through bravery, being true to himself and his family or friends, and meeting a challenge that’s beyond his years by using all the skills he has learned. He often has a mentor or someone he looks up to and has learned from. The Sea Lord Chronicles is a sea adventure story with similar heroes, a lot more history and a little magic thrown in for good measure.

Q. Tell us something about the main character, Alexander Hope.

A. Alexander is a fourteen-year-old English lad who has lived a fairly sheltered existence at his uncle’s crumbling manor house. Alexander comes from an aristocratic family whose ancestor Sir Algernon Hope was a sea elemental famous for defeating the Spanish Armada and saving England. Since then, the family’s fortunes have faded. His uncle sends him off to serve as a junior officer in the Royal Navy, which was a fairly common practice back then. So this poor kid Alexander hasn’t even seen the ocean before, and he gets seasick in the harbor, which is very embarrassing. He pretty much doesn’t know anything about running a ship. But Alexander discovers that he has inherited his distant ancestor’s ability to manipulate the sea. I think that Alexander’s real power is that he is brave and very loyal to his new friends and to his country. We see him struggle do the right thing, and we root for him, and Alexander needs all the help he can get because he has his share of enemies who are jealous of his power and his loyalty.

It’s important to keep in mind that the story takes places at a time when England is fighting for survival against the French Emperor Napoleon. There’s a lot at stake, not just for Alexander, but for England.

Q. Gryphons? Magic? Really?

A. Re-imagining history can be so much fun. In its simplest form imagine that Napoleon won Waterloo, or that a modern Aegis-class battleship time traveled to the battle of Trafalgar. Imagine a realistic portrayal of life aboard a Royal Navy frigate, sea battles, storms, naval strategy and all of that. Magic has pretty much died out or been outlawed, but here is a boy with a rare talent who could change the war. Airplanes haven’t been invented yet, but the Royal Flyer Corps uses gryphons for scouting, messages between ships, and aerial attacks. Huzzah!

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Sea Lord Chronicles book trailer

Here’s the book trailer that Aidan and I produced for The Sea Lord Chronicles. It probably won’t be confused with the work of George Lucas anytime soon, but my son and I made it with a little help from Apple’s Moviemaker. He composed the music for it in Garage Band. Enjoy!

 

 

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Big book signing at the beach!

Browseabout presents Authors Days

23 popular authors to appear November 23-25

Delaware’s premier independent bookstore since 1975, Browseabout Books, takes its dedication to its community of readers to a new level as it hosts 23 authors to meet and greet and sign books for their fans during the first annual Browseabout Authors Days, Friday November 23 – Sunday November 25.

Created by owner Steve Crane, the event expands Browseabout’s ongoing commitment to support talented local authors and publishers by giving them a forum and opportunities to showcase their work.

“We looked for the best of the best from the local and regional writing scene,” said store manager Susan McAnelly. “We looked for authors with a proven track record whose works are well-written and well-received, and for those who contribute to our community.”

The authors, with works covering the breadth of today’s publishing industry, enthusiastically responded. Books heralding from such internationally recognized publishing houses such as St. Martin’s Press, Dutton, and Arcadia, and from rapidly growing publishers such as A and M, will be offered alongside very successful self-publications, and encompass a full range of topics and genres that include Children, Young Adult, Graphic Novels, War, Romance, Emotional Drama, Mystery, Murder, Humor, Action and Adventure, Personal Growth and Survival, Local History, Poetry, and Rehoboth Beach.

“A unique resort requires a unique book,” says Rich Barnett, author of The Discreet Charms of a Bourgeois Beach Town (appearing 3-5 p.m. Friday November 23). Soaring in popularity, the book provides insights, heart, humor and a sense of curiosity that gives readers an unsurpassed insider’s view of Rehoboth Beach.

Fans of young adult literature will be thrilled by the Capital Girls trilogy, co-authored by Maz Rauber and Amy Reingold under the pseudonym Ella Monroe (appearing 1-3 p.m. Saturday November 24). Published by St. Martin’s Press, Capital Girls is a story of mystery, adventure and intrigue as four in-crowd girls recklessly flirt with danger and guys – including the President’s son –until one of them dies in a mysterious accident, shaking their bonds of friendship and compelling secret revelations with unfathomable consequences.

A personalized book by a favorite author makes a cherished gift, and the Delaware Humane Society will be providing free gift-wrapping throughout the event, with all donations going directly to the charity.

Browseabout Authors Days runs from Friday November 23 – Sunday November 25, with most authors appearing between 11 a.m. and 5 p.m. at Browseabout Books, 133 Rehoboth Avenue (telephone: 226-2665).  More information and a complete event schedule are available at BrowseaboutBooks.com.

BROWSEABOUT AUTHORS DAYS

Dates:     Friday November 23 – Sunday November 25

Location: Browseabout Books
133 Rehoboth Ave.
Rehoboth Beach, DE 19971

For more information visit BrowseaboutBooks.com, telephone

302-226-2665, or email susan@browseaboutbooks.com

FRIDAY NOVEMBER 23

9 a.m. – throughout the day

VINCE GISRIEL

Author of Hearts Away, Bombs Away

 

11 a.m. – 1 p.m.

TERRI CLIFTON

Author of A Random Soldier

MARIBETH FISCHER
Author of The Life You Longed For 
FRAN HASSON
Author of Allawe

Ann Revere Reed writing as

REVERE REED
Author of On a Dime

STEVE ROBISON
Author of ecstatic beat – a collection of poems

1 p.m. – 3 p.m.

CAROLE BROWNING-BLACK

Author of Buying Time-Storing Memories

Steuart Colevas writing as

G. COLEMAN
Author of The Crooked Coast

3 p.m. – 5 p.m.

RICH BARNETT

Author of The Discreet Charms of a Bourgeois Beach Town

SCOTT KING

Author of Holiday Wars Volume 1: The Holiday Spirit

KELLY HUGHES ROBERTS

Author of The Road to Chianti
SATURDAY NOVEMBER 24

 

9 a.m. – throughout the day

VINCE GISRIEL

Author of Hearts Away, Bombs Away

 

11 a.m. – 1 p.m.

EILEEN BAKER

Author of Chunkin Punkins
STEFANI DEOUL

Author of The Carousel

 

FAY JACOBS

Author of For Frying Out Loud

TERRY PLOWMAN

Publisher of Delaware Beach Life’s Best of the First 10 Years

1 p.m. – 3 p.m

DAVID HEALEY

Author of Delmarva Legends & Lore and Great Storms of the Chesapeake

MIKE LAMBERT
Author of Eastern Shore League

Maz Rauber and Amy Reingold writing as

ELLA MONROE
Author of Capital Girls

3 p.m. – 5 p.m.

JAMES DIEHL
Author of Remembering Sussex County and WWII Heroes of Southern Delaware

MATHEW LEE GILL
Author of leaving the canoe club and Malice Aforethought

MEGAN HART

Author of The Space Between Us, Dirty, Broken, Deeper, Tempted, and more
SUNDAY NOVEMBER 25

 

9 a.m. – throughout the day

 

VINCE GISRIEL

Author of Hearts Away, Bombs Away

 

11 a.m. – 1 p.m.

 

DARRYL DUKE
Author of Why I Pray in the Shower

LACEY LAFFERTY
Author of Delaware Horse Racing

KELLY HUGHES ROBERTS

Author of The Road to Chianti

1 p.m. – 3 p.m.

 

STEPHEN HAYES
Author of Light on Dark Water

SHERRY CHAPPELLE

Author of Salmagundi
BRUCE CHAPPELLE
Music

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Tough competition for books these days

 Great Storms of the Chesapeake or pumpkin pie? That was some tough competition at the library raffle!

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Juggling point of view

Point of view can be a slippery slope for writers. I think it’s because we want to tell everyone’s story … it’s hard to stay with just one character. For the most part, we’re probably better off sticking with one POV per scene or chapter. This was the approach I took for my novel Winter Sniper. The story is told in third person omniscient, so that the reader gets inside the heads of several characters.

There are a few very skilled writers who can “pull off” a POV shift within a single scene or paragraph. A writer like Patrick O’Brian or Robert Harris manages to take the reader from head to head without creating confusion, even on a single page.

I tried this is recently with the YA novel I’m working on now, The Sea Lord Chronicles. For the most part, the story is told from the POV of the main character, a young Royal Navy Ensign named Alexander Hope. In the example that follows, the second paragraph is largely in italics to reflect that the POV has shifted from the main character to Professor Hobhouse, who is slowly revealing himself as Alexander’s mentor:

“Alexander glanced to his right and took some reassurance from the big figure of Biscuit lumping along with Rigley at the reins and Professor Hobhouse wearing a silly floppy hat and goggles, all the while scanning the skies. Hobhouse was undeniably scholarly, yet he had a surprising skill with sword and pistol. Alexander would have bet his Sunday dinner that Hobhouse hadn’t always had his nose buried in a book.

What he couldn’t see was the death grip the professor had on the saddle pommel. I wouldn’t have thought myself so timid in the air, Hobhouse observed to himself, not for the first time. These flyers take to the skies daily without a thought, so it is perfectly safe. Yet if I should be so lucky to feel the ground under my feet again or the deck of a ship it would take a direct order from the king himself to get me airborne again. He gulped, blinked against the sunlight gleaming off Rigley’s helmet, and tried to ignore his hammering heart.”

Could it be that writers feel a bit like Hobhouse when we try to be tricky and shift POV?

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